Hello IELTS Daily students!
I'm here, and I have
a wonderful class today
because we're going to talk about maps.
We're going to talk about writing task one,
so I have my cup of tea
and I'm going to talk about
an example that I have written.
And this is a map.
It's a before and an after map.
And I know some of you really struggle
with this type of writing task.
So, if you want to learn
how to improve your writing test one,
you can download this sample answer
from the IELTS Daily website.
You can come and download
lots of sample answers from there.
Learn about how we approach the task,
but I'm going to talk a little bit today
about some of my thoughts
and the way which I approached this task.
So, you're gonna need a pen,
some paper to make some notes.
You need to put your thinking hat on
and get ready,
because we're gonna have lots of information.
Lots of ideas, so let's go.
All right, welcome back.
So, I like doing maps,
but I know that they're not as easy as some of you think.
On the screen now,
you will see there is a map
from a town called, "Islip".
Let's look at the question itself,
because you should always start
by looking at the question prompt,
and it says:
The maps below show the centre
of a small town called Islip
as it is now, and plans for its development.
Summarize information by selecting
and reporting the main features,
and make comparisons where relevant.
And this is important for comparisons.
In the map, you will often
have to make a comparison.
Alright.
How would you approach this?
Because it's always interesting to hear ideas about
how you would organize your writing
and how many paragraphs you would write.
And interestingly,
If you come over to the IELTS daily website
and if you download this particular sample,
you will find there are actually
two samples for you to look at.
And the organization of both of them is slightly different.
You can see how I have
organized the paragraphs
in one writing and in another writing.
Personally, and I think today,
we'll focus on the second example that
I've written in this particular exercise.
and you can think,
would you do the same or
would you use the first example?
Right.
Let's analyze the map and talk about
how we could maybe organize our ideas.
So on the map, we can see there are
some shops, a main road, and some shops
at either side of the main road.
There's a school, a park, and some housing,
the housing is in the centre of the town,
but it's also worth noting
that the countryside is at the top,
the north section of the town.
So it's a fairly simple town, the...
you could say the road say:
The road runs through,
that's why the road runs through
the centre of the town.
Interestingly,
In the future,
We're talking about the future now,
and this is important for your language.
You need to be able to identify
the difference between something
which happened in the past.
Something which is now and
something which is predicted to be
or going to be, or planned to be,
and that will influence your writing style.
Please, please pay attention to this
because the examiner is looking out for it,
if it's a planned or a future development.
Use the future forms,
and we'll talk a little bit about
how I did that and which language I used.
In the future,
the centre of the town
is going to look really different.
There are going to be many changes.
And for you to score above a band 7,
you need to identify the main changes,
the biggest differences.
And you need to cover those in your overview.
What's the main thing
that's happening to the town?
Then in your body paragraphs,
you need to look at the details.
OK.
And this is one of the hardest tasks
for many people who do maps,
and I'll talk about
how I did it in my sample.
So let's have a look at my sample,
and we'll first read the introduction,
which should be fairly simple.
I said:
the maps illustrate how the town centre
of Islip is expected to be redeveloped
from its current setup.
So, is expected to be redeveloped,
and that's the passive form for the future,
in terms of the expectation.
It is clear that the town centre is due to
undergo significant redevelopment.
Is due to,
future form is: expected to,
is due to undergo significant redevelopment.
Notably, the addition of a new transport network
and various other commercial facilities.
at the expense of some of the
green belt around the town.
Now for some of you,
you're going to be thinking,
this is really difficult language and
what's the purpose of this particular section?
Well, this particular section is my overview.
What are the main differences?
And remember that an overview has to be
in every writing piece for the
academic training test,
for every writing piece that you do.
You have to have an overview.
Some people have an overview
as a separate paragraph.
Normally,
I have an overview as a separate paragraph
but today, I've just decided to
include my overview in my introductory paragraph.
That's okay.
You could also have your overview at the end.
It's up to you.
So, I've just looked at the main differences.
The main differences are:
there's going to be big changes in the transport.
There's going to be lots of new development
of shops and the centre of the town,
and there's going to be a loss
of some of the countryside.
Did you notice that the countryside has been lost?
So you need to know that.
Looking back sometimes,
I noticed things that I could improve.
Looking back, you may want to include
the idea that there's probably
going to be more housing as well.
But in the overview,
you don't need to have lots of details.
Let's go back and have a look at my first paragraph.
It says:
At present.
Now, this is an indicator for the reader
what the purpose of this paragraph is,
and I'm talking about comparing the two maps.
And I've said: At present,
which means now,
and I'm just going to describe
the situation of the map now.
Not going to talk about
the future at the moment,
because the future and the comparison
will be in the next paragraph.
At present, Islip Town Centre comprises
a series of shops with a main road
running through the centre of the town.
To the south,
this is interesting.
To the south,
you could say:
in the south,
but it's even better, to the south.
To the south, there are two housing estates.
A park is situated to the east,
and a school is located to the southwest.
So I've just noted
each important feature on the map:
Housing, a main road, school and park.
That's, they are the main features.
Now, you're going to write your next paragraph,
which makes the comparison about
what the new town will be like.
The future of Islip will look rather different,
with the main shopping area being
radically transformed,
affecting some of the countryside.
The central road will be converted
to a pedestrian area.
And a brand new ring road will be
constructed around the town.
So, Brand new,
which means really new, brand new.
Good language there.
The shops to the north will be
converted to a shopping center.
Car park, bus station and some new housing.
So we're looking at each part and
introducing the new features of the map.
The shops to the south of the former
main road will remain.
They will stay the same.
They will remain.
They will stay the same.
The park will lose some of its size
as a result of the dual carriage way.
And the housing in school
will remain fairly unchanged.
So you're talking about things which are changing,
but you're also talking about
things which are not changing,
so they will remain unchanged
or remain the same.
It's important to make some comparisons.
Now you may want to include a section.
Maybe I missed it here.
You may want to include a section to say
the town is going to be much more accessible,
because the ring road will go around,
so it's going to be easier
for residents to get around.
And I think that would be something
that you might want to include in your writing.
Sometimes I look back at my writing
and I think, how could I make that
a little bit better?
And it's always possible to make
things a little bit better, right?
So in a map, you have to
think about the key features:
what are the big differences?
You have to organize your ideas
into clear paragraphs.
Very, very important that you have
clear paragraphs which signify
or have a main purpose.
Fantastic.
Do you think maps are easy?
I don't think they're that easy.
I think they're enjoyable,
and they seem quite logical,
but you have to make sure
that you're covering all the points
that the examiner wants.
So you have to think about,
are you mentioning the main differences?
Are you covering the the key details?
Are you making comparisons where relevant?
Having all those ticked and having all those covered,
it's extremely important.
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