I've issue here and in this video we're gonna be taking a subscriber stores from
0 to $1,000 per day with Shopify drop shipping so in my last video we had a
giveaway for two coaching calls so the those two winners
I've already messaged them congratulations and in this video I'm
gonna be giving away one 30-minute coaching call to one lucky winner in the
comment section so all you need to do to enter is write EECOM letter by letter so
that would be 4 comments so the first one will be e and C O and M so just for
comments there and I will be picking one winner at random
also there there have been a lot of people asking me for paid coaching and
are unfortunately I don't have time for this at this moment but maybe in the
future I will offer it and if there is someone that is an expert on YouTube
grow for Instagram growth make sure to contact me and we can figure out some
way how we can cooperate with each other so you're probably wondering how I'm
gonna help my subscriber stores hit 1,000 dollars per day well it's gonna be
pretty simple I'm gonna review their store their facebook ad and also their
thumbnail so right now let's get into my computer screen ok so we got a few
source to review so let's first start with the ads and then to the store so
looking at this ad copy ok you can keep your child closing safe so I'll write
something different so I would write like this premium baby anti loss
whistling will keep your child safe something like that and I also like this
thing this is really good as well but today only don't miss out by now this is
like too much so you're pushing it so I would just remove that and let's watch
this video
okay so this text is too small like most like most people probably won't see it
like that well so I'll just get rid of that so from what I can see some of the
scenes are a little bit too long so what you need to do is like every two to
three seconds a scene has to change you got to see something different because I
see like a lot of similar footages so I'll just cut this video down to like 30
seconds because it doesn't need to be like one minute and nine second long
it's like just too long so I'll do like 30 to 35 seconds of this and try to show
a wide variety of footage you don't want to show you the same thing again and
again you know and also I noticed like some problems with the ad copy like no
worries just fun with your child so the thing is it like that ad like the ad
need to sound like it's written by an American person or like a native English
speaker because nobody would say like no worries just fun with your child so I
would change that yeah you probably maybe need like a Native American or
like a friend who would like review your like your video to see if your English
is correct so yeah I'll do this as well and also at
the stop bar like keep your child child closed and safe I would just delete that
and output share this we have a friend who needs this or share this with a
friend who would love this and this will get this will get your head like more
shares and more engagement which will bring down the CPMs so it will bring
down like the cost of the ad so definitely I would implement that and
also the video is just too long you cannot even do it you cannot even
publish it on Instagram feed so like the maximum is like 60 seconds
so yeah what I recommend is like 30 seconds 35 seconds I've recently also
talked to a facebook rep and he said like for conversion campaigns it's
always better like to do like 15 to 20 seconds he said are the best performing
so yeah I'll just really try to make it fast
speed up some like footages you know some scenes and also just two or three
seconds like every two to three seconds something needs to change
okay so let's go right now to the store and yeah so let's just try to look at it
as from a mobile phone okay so this seems like Brooklyn theme which is
pretty fast so yeah good for you okay okay so this size one size
I'll just remove it because you don't really need it okay so Add to Cart
mm-hmm so what I see what's missing here is like send this to a messenger like
that's basically like an app like record or shop message these apps are so
powerful like my shop message app got me I think like 7000 dollars in revenue so
yeah there is so much money that you can recover by having this like send to
messenger things so definitely try to install like record or shop message okay
so this block of text is too long I'll just cut this in half and use some both
you know yeah to just highlight the most important part so these experiment
images are pretty good I like them okay okay
yeah so this is like a little bit too much text so again I'll just make it
make it a little bit shorter yeah these images I I like these because
they can explain a lot of things in just by looking at them real quick so this is
good I also like the sticky Add to Cart this is great for people when they
scroll it's always there okay so okay so you have looks reviews it seems like
okay so this looks great but with looks reviews you gotta be careful so you
gotta you cannot have like yeah so shipping 20 days on euro which is in
Russia yeah so I'll be careful from someone
those reviews you got to make sure that they have like proper English and I
would also avoid like reviews where there is like written shopper or
something like that from looks what I would I've noticed so here you can you
can see it's like in Russian so you want to avoid like these kind of reviews yeah
because the these reviews will turn off like American American buyers so yeah
okay so show more reviews okay customer okay so it seems like you have a lot of
apps man so what I would go through is I would also check your page speed if it's
more than three seconds you need to you need to lower it down and how you can
lower it is by deleting some apps that are slowing down your store and also you
need to optimize all your all your images and for that a great website is
tiny PNG calm and there you can compress all
the images so I would recommend that and yeah I see I give maybe too many images
here yeah so it seems like when people go there so this could be also slowing
down your store because you have so many pictures there is no need for so many
because they already saw like the ads so they don't need to see this image again
you know because they they have seen it so yeah I would just remove everything
that's not needed and make it as simple as possible okay so now let's go to
another store okay fashion alert okay so the first thing
that I would just remove is tag somebody who look gorgeous in it Facebook doesn't
really like it it has been misused a lot so your ad can be penalized for that so
just don't include that in your like ad copies you can put it in the video like
in the text but don't put it in the ad copy because Facebook will see and yeah
so what I see here this seems like a link
this doesn't look like is it image ad yeah so it's like a link at it seems
like okay so what I would do is I would just do an image ad like a square or
even vertical which would take up more space so I would do that but yeah this
image so like when you're showing like an image ad I think like the white
background stuff doesn't work that like that well so I'll focus on images like
these when somebody's actually wearing it looks more lifestyle it looks more
cool so for image ads I'll definitely use pictures like these and I would
remove like anything with like white background so you don't want that okay
so let's go right now to the store okay so this red recs asked to okay so buckle
strap shoes okay so this seems like Brooklyn again okay so I like there is
currency carbon conversion okay this is good what I also like is the yeah the
pop-up social proof that's good okay so shoe
size um yeah I think this is a little bit confusing like what shoe size this
is UK or us I think you should probably specify that it's not written here at
all Add to Cart buy it now okay okay so this doesn't really make sense like how
to buy okay so I'll just remove that ah
no paypal account needed I don't think this is yeah I'll just remove like the
no PayPal account Anita tax and how to buy full refund if you don't receive
your order this is strange we'll refund if you don't receive an order like
customer is gonna think like like why would I even think about not receiving
the order so full or partial yeah I'll just I would just do something like I
right like a frilly day money money bag or in tears something like that but I
wouldn't write probably like this not sold in stores okay cool cool cool okay
so this text is too long so I'll make it shorter use bold also what I noticed
that you have different fonts from here and here so I'll just make it consistent
and the size chart okay it seems kind of readable yeah
maybe on phone it won't be readable like this like 34 you know it seems pretty
small so maybe I will just change that as well so you have a more readable size
chart okay cool cool okay so here I noticed this share tweet and pin so guys
I don't really recommend that so what I would I won't for people when I did come
to my store is just to buy I don't want them to share anything like I would like
people to share my ad like within Facebook buy but I don't really like
this so when you want people to come to your store you just want them to buy and
not get distracted by anything other by anything else
okay so this is good this is good as well yeah again as you can see like this
review has like seems like a polish words so yeah I'll just also like remove
it with looks I think you can like remove the text and you can only have
the image and the stars so I'll do that I'm not sure what is this just delete it
maybe contact looks support to remove it and yeah this is everything and you can
also get rid of the powered by Shopify there's a tutorial you can just google
it so yeah this is what I think the price the price is 29
I think the price is very cheap man like how much do these shoes cost they look
pretty good so I would imagine these shoes costs like almost like twenty
dollars or seventeen dollars I think maybe
so your margins are too low so whenever like you are selling a product
you wanna at least $20 margin because the customer purchases are pretty
expensive now that they can be at $15 $16 you know so you need to have enough
margin there so I've made this more expensive okay so let's look at this
another thing another the last the last store stretch and seal it so I would
remove this first line okay this is good
yeah I would just get I would just get rid of this and I would put this benefit
points here so first a question to like hook their attention then the benefit
points here and then just order here and like below you can write like only 99
available and that's it so let's let's watch this ad let's see so how it looks
yeah so this ad doesn't look engaging at all like yeah the only thing that's
moving is the text and I feel like some of the scenes are for too long like four
five seconds or something or four seconds you have one scene you need to
do like three seconds boom boom boom boom boom like real quick you know a lot
of benefits yeah and this isn't really engaging and also another problem I can
see here it seems like it's kind of wide so it seems like the aspect ratio is
also too wide so for Facebook because like most of the people there on the on
their phone the aspect ratio should be either like square so like 1,000 by
1,000 or you can do slightly vertical but I would not do like this horizontal
because it will make it it will make this text and everything like really
small so I would change that as well
yeah because this doesn't really seem that engaging so let's go to the store
and let's see what happens there okay
divine shopper okay so again I see there's too many
images like most people are they probably not going to watch all those
photos so maybe I'll just do like one or two pictures and then the variant images
it seems like you have too many there so this could be slowing down your store
and it's kind of like not necessary to have so how much does it cost in you as
the okay oh wow okay so this is another problem with margin like how much does
it cost this product to ship with a packet and the product cost I think this
could cause like three dollars maybe four with a package shipping that means
that your margin is like $11 this is no way to be profitable so I would
recommend like pumping this up at least to $19 because yeah this is not good and
the color out right like white pink you know because this is this
doesn't this isn't really clear like what are those colors you know also this
Add to Cart button is too small you want it you want to make it longer and bigger
so people can instantly see it's really good for dropshipping like for branding
like you don't need like a huge Add to Cart button
but for dropshipping where you want to just get sales right away you really
need a big Add to Cart button or you can change it to buy it now which is also
which has worked also very well for a lot of people okay
so I like these benefit points yeah this is good yeah so this is like too much
text nobody's gonna read it again I would just remove this no need to share
tweet and you need also some reviews I think this product is pretty popular so
you're definitely gonna find some reviews on looks on Aliexpress so that
as well but your product needs like an upsell so you can do like volume
discount because I can imagine people buying more of this so you can do like
quantity breaks app or you can use like some Shopify discount feature like buy X
get Y and you could you could have like discount codes for people who would buy
to who'd buy 3 and stuff like that but this is a good product to upsell like a
pic volume so yeah you definitely episodes like there is no upsell there
is no there's no abandoned cart you know so there is a lot of stuff you can
change and you can maybe do the pop-ups yeah it seems like very bare-bones this
store which is good but still I think it lacks upsell and backends I hope you
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