After a few fan character reviews you guys seemed interested in original character reviews
Original as in not part of an existing franchise
I'm going to continue the category point system
But there will be no how well does this character fit in with the universe rank because there really is no universe yet
So we'll continue with the design of the character and any
Interesting ideas if we add them together we get a nice and even 10-point system
Yay, here, we have Audrey age 10 gender female
disability, dyslexia
species
human???
Personality timid nervous insecure doesn't trust
95% of people current status attends a high class
all-girls school where she is bullied constantly for her disability and
Appearance she lives with her alcoholic mother who owns a casino and hardly pays any attention to her
oh boy
It's going to be one of those her father died when she was nine months old her mother won't tell her anything about him she
Is a single child but wishes she had a sibling who would care about her has been through so much pain
And injury that she has gotten used to it
Wait what why has she gone through a bunch of physical injuries is that from the bullying does she work in a sweatshop?
I mean she's missing a piece of her finger on her left hand how did that happen? I'm genuinely baffled by this sentence
There's no other explanations given. Well. I don't know what to make of this
I guess they hint that she is a different creature because of the human?? thing, but that's it
there's no explanation to why she has completely red eyes or why she gets injured so often of course we also have the
Everything sucks for this character status, which doesn't really do anything except
Make you feel sorry for the character so far this whole description seems unfinished, and I'm just confused
I like that the design isn't too over-the-top. I'm assuming that the character isn't human here
I like the idea of getting injured often. That sounds really bad
You could make this because her species has a weaker body than humans or something like that
But these ideas are given very little explanation or development this OC is named Ingii here
We have a pretty simple geometric design with some odd
Stylistic choices these eyes are kind of confusing like is he being cross-eyed right now
Maybe if the whites of the eye were curved with the outline this would be easier to understand in
Ingii, 23, He/him
Bisexual, angel-demon? These people are really unsure about what species their characters are...
Taken af, coffee addict
Over-emotional, Dogs
Memes + dog memes are the heart + soul deathly afraid of spiders
well it seems that we have the same problem that a lot of o'seas have which is not enough detail or
Explanations to anything I don't understand the point of making an original character if you're just gonna provide us with
something that looks like a slightly personal driver's license. The only things we have for a personality is over
Emotional which is something but without much more than that it's kind of bland
We also have deathly afraid of spiders, but does that have any effect on the character's personality?
Or is it just a fear that they have
Because they just need a fear I feel like if the trait doesn't add anything to the character
It doesn't need to be there who knows I could be wrong, but without any more information
I can only speculate the design is clean, and I appreciate the attempt at a simplified style
But the eyes are just so stylized that it's just confusing
There's almost no ideas here. Let alone interesting ones. Next, is some sort of monster. Oh see by the name of
Asterisk I guess since Undertale exists
We're going to name every OC after some sort of font or text symbol.
I still don't know what Asterisks actually is though. I guess some kind of alien experiment gone wrong
like
Krocedils entire race. Although, the whole point of Asterix when I made her is to be a fusion based
abomination that has no morals and lives to die.
Cheerful.
Name Asterisk, gender female, sexuality
pansexual
special traits
Unaffected by pain stimuli immune to most harmful chemicals as well as UV and
ionizing radiation plasma breath and acidic blood.
All attempts to heal spine would have failed although it appears to be impervious to
Infections and functions as though it was inside the body
psychiatric analysis
mentally disturbed
Weaknesses tends to take heavy damage in fights against foes that do not fear her as she cannot
determine the severity of any injuries she obtains. Can't stand the smell of citrus fruits.
Well that's a bit random
Cannot swim becomes agitated
When others insult her accent pressure her about her origin or ask about the Bell on her tail?
So it seems like you got yourself a basic abomination
I like the has no morals and lives to die aspect of it
It would be interesting to explore that concept the design is uniquely gruesome. It might be a bit too cluttered
I don't think the cyborg limbs are really necessary especially if they want to go for an organic
Monster feel which I think would work well with the spine thing, but overall I do enjoy it
I mentioned before there's a few ideas that I think have potential, but they could be explored some more here. We have
eful vivvy which is a zombie OC of sorts I do have to mention the detail of this art especially the abundance of
folds in the clothes the left eye does seem
Uneven I know the head is turned so the eye would be smaller, but the size difference seems a bit extreme
I like the purple skin and the gore on the arms and neck however
It's a bit too detailed for the style they're going for. Here is my new OC
Vivvy is kind of like a zombie
But instead of just being there doing zombie stuff and eating brains
She just in constant dying state at least she needs to be or else she will die
What? She is like opposite of a normal human in order to live she needs to keep her body in a dying,
dead state that would be easy since it's easy to die, just rip your heart and guts out
But that's not the case her body can regenerate even something like nerve system and brain cells are able to
Regenerate only thing that can kill her is when she is not in the dying State wow
This is getting confusing yes
Yes
It is the back story pretty much goes through the story of how she died sort of and
Realized she could regenerate
I think the design fits the character
Overall the regenerative aspect of this could be explored the dying to live part
However is really confusing, and I know they already know this
But like maybe it's just not explained well or the concept needs to be developed
Maybe even simplified anyway. My name is SolarSands and
Goodbye
*Generic cheerful music*